Caridina logemanni Classification Poster

[Grubs]

Yes - the new imagery looks great.

 

More suggestions...

 

Delete "SHRIMP" from title? (seems a little redundant)

 

2nd sentence: "this fresh water dwarf shrimp" or "this fresh water dwarf shrimp species"  (but not  "dwarf species".  I don't think there are any fresh water dwarves. They don't even like to take a bath)

 

3rd sentence: agree with mossy - delete "The"

 

also 3rd sentence:  delete "UP".  ie. "they grow to a length of 1.5..."    (plants and children grow UP)

 

 

Simplify the params with just a simple title and the parameters i.e. replace the long title  "CL generally do well under the following water conditions" with just

"Preferred water conditions"

 

then you can delete the disclaimer in () also.

[Shrimpmaster]

Very nice. Good points from Grubs. You've got eye for detail.

 

About the patterns, only the Flowerhead pattern seems unrealistic to me. I guess this is the designers interpretation? Because the flower is not visible from top, it's on both sides. The top part looks a little bit like a very small crown pattern.

 

Example:

 

 

Talking about the crown pattern, this also could be a little more realistic, good example:

 

 

But this are just minor things. The design is really awesome, it's so good you have a designer who want's to do this. Thumbs up!!

Edited May 22, 2015 by Shrimpmaster

[NoGi]

Is there a better example of the top of a flowerhead?

[NoGi]

I've updated the first post with the revised chart. 

Edited May 25, 2015 by NoGi

[buck]

love the updated poster! it looks mint!

[lodo]

Poster would look amazing on a shrimp/fish room wall.

[NoGi]

Yeah, I've posted a low res JPEG here. I've got this in high res A2 size. Anyone know where one can get cheap A2 printing?

[Shrimpmaster]

Wow, really nice update. Much more realistic flowerhead. Very well done!

I know cheap printing in Holland

[Disciple]

+1 really great chart.

[Quakeszn]

Sorry if off topic. But having a kh of 0-1dh would make it very suseptable to a ph crash. Or am i wrong

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